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Open Question: Is this a good story?
Being classified as the school good girl never was a problem for me. I made some great friends that accepted me, though our personalities were completely different and even began dating a great guy who for the most part respected the certain "limits" I had in our relationship. I could see in his eyes that he wanted more than I could give him and I knew it was only a matter of time before he decided that what we had wasn't enough. What I didn't know, was that that time would come so soon. "Katarina," Darren whispered with a frown. It was quite clear he was almost as upset about what was about to happen as I was. Maybe it was the way his voice cracked as he said my name, or maybe it was the way his deep brown eyes avoided mine. "I know what you're about to say," I whispered back. "Save yourself the trouble and just go home." "I'm sorry." He hung his head and rand his fingers through his hair. "You know I love you and you know I'd do anything for you but I can't keep waiting for you. Our relationship is going nowhere and I know you have limits but I don't." With a final hug he walked out my front door leaving me all alone in my living room. A single tear rolled down my cheek and I swallowed back the lump raising in my throat. It took minutes before I could even breath. How could something so expected, hurt me so much? Before I had a chance to break down my mom walked in, as if she knew I was hurting. My mom always sensed when something was wrong. She said as a mother it's instinctual, I just thought of it as a sixth sense. "Honey, would you like to talk about it?" My mom leaned against the back of the sofa and rubbed my shoulder. It was impossible to respond right away. The lump in my throat kept returning. I swallowed the tears back one more time. It was only temporary so before it had a chance to return I managed to whisper "We're over." "I'm sorry sweetie. That boy isn't worth your time." She kissed my cheek and wrapped me up in a tight hug. "I just made some cookies for the church bake sale. If I'm not mistaken I made a few extra." A small smile appeared on her face and I couldn't help but smile back. I loved my mom but even I knew better than to trust her cooking. For her sake, and the sake of anyone who came over for dinner, it was a good thing my father was a chef. Not a professional one, but at least we could eat his cooking and live to tell the tale. With a small giggle I wiped my final tear away. "Mom, I really am not in the mood to die." She laughed along with me and pulled me off the couch and into the kitchen. "These are good, I promise." Hesitantly, I looked at the tray of cookies laying on the table. She was right. They weren't burnt and they actually smelled edible. I grabbed a cookie off the tray and held it up to my lips. Slowly, I opened my mouth and bit off a tiny piece. It was warm and sweet. The chocolate chips slowly melted on my tongue. My mom waited patiently for my critique. "These are amazing! When did you become so great at cooking?" She shrugged and walked back over to the counter. My eyes aimlessly scanned the room until something in the garbage caught my eye. Curious, I walked over to the trash can and my mom's head snapped up. "Um, I wouldn't go over there!" She yelled. Instead of stopping I got closer and sighed. "Seriously?" I asked with an eyebrow raised. Mom smiled innocently at the empty plastic bin in my hands. One that used to contain a dozen chocolate chip cookies. "Way to be." I chuckled. "Yeah well, my first batch didn't go so well. Anyway, Father Andrew probably prefers store-bought cookies than rancid poisonous ones. Right?" She had a point there. I doubt killing everyone at the church would go over well in confession. "Fine, you win. But these boxes are recyclable. You're lucky I saw these. It'd be a shame if my own mother took part in killing the environment." After throwing the boxes into the recyclable bin I went up to my room. I thought I was fine but once I shut the door and was surrounded by silence, I couldn't help but think about Darren. Did he ever really love me? He broke up with me because I didn't want to go all the way with him. Is that a reasonable excuse? Did he only stay with me in hopes that someday I'd crack? The questions flowing through my mind wouldn't stop. Question after question. Needless to say I didn't have the answer to any of them. I glanced over and noticed it was only nine o'clock. Maybe I just needed to talk to someone, and I immediately knew who. After a minute of ringing she finally picked up. "Hello?" "Hey Erica." My voice was still scratchy from crying. &qu "Are you okay?" She asked worried. "Darren broke up with me." I mumbled. After a few seconds she still hadn't said anything. "Are you still there?" "Yeah, I can't believe this! Do you want me to kill him for you? I will, I mean I can kick his..." Before she had a chance to finish her rant, I interrupted her. "No. It's fine. I just wanted to talk to you." "Oh, okay. Well, why did he break up with you? Do you know?" "I didn't have sex with him." I heard her gasp. "Please, let me kill him." "No. It's not his fault. He's a guy and I'm just really..." I tried to find the right word but couldn't think of one. "Ethical?" She suggested. I slightly nodded, which was stupid since she couldn't see me. "Yeah. I guess." "Well forget that asshole. I'm going shopping with Andrea and Jessica tomorrow. You have to come." "Yeah, that sounds fun." "Cool. Well, I should probably get ready for bed. But if you want to talk some more I don't mind staying awake a little l "No, I'll be okay." "Are you sure?" She asked skeptically. "Yeah. I'll see you tomorrow." "Yeah you will, and hey, it's the last day of school. Our last day as sophomores!" Her voice was filled with such optimism, I couldn't help but smile along with her. "Yeah, this summer will be great. I heard they're opening up a new pool at the park." Erica's loud shriek stung my ear. I held the phone to my chest to smother the sound. As soon as she was finished I held the phone back to my ear. "Sorry about that. I'm sugar high right now. But yeah, and now that you're single maybe we can find you a nice piece of man candy. Just wear something sexy." We both laughed and I shook my head. "There are two things wrong with that suggestion. First, I just got dumped. I'm really not into dating anytime soon. Secondly, If it's 'sexy' it's not going to be on me." I emphasized each word but knew that she wasn't convinced. "Okay, we'll see about that. Shan't we?" "Whoa, usin g big words I see." I gasped in fake shock. "Oh shut up. I really should go now. Don't worry about Darren though. You deserve better." "I guess so. Thank you." "No problem, goodnight babydoll." "Goodnight." I smiled and shut the phone. As soon as I put it down I laid down on my bed and within a minute I was out. moreOpen Question: I could use your critique please and thanks :)?
So I wrote this in hopes I could make a bigger story out of it and I already have a plot going anyway please post opinions on this. Honest ones please. :) Being classified as the school good girl never was a problem for me. I made some great friends that accepted me, though our personalities were completely different and even began dating a great guy who for the most part respected the certain "limits" I had in our relationship. I could see in his eyes that he wanted more than I could give him and I knew it was only a matter of time before he decided that what we had wasn't enough. What I didn't know, was that that time would come so soon. "Katarina," Darren whispered with a frown. It was quite clear he was almost as upset about what was about to happen as I was. Maybe it was the way his voice cracked as he said my name, or maybe it was the way his deep brown eyes avoided mine. "I know what you're about to say," I whispered back. "Save yourself the trouble and just go home." "I'm sorry." He hung his head and rand his fingers through his hair. "You know I love you and you know I'd do anything for you but I can't keep waiting for you. Our relationship is going nowhere and I know you have limits but I don't." With a final hug he walked out my front door leaving me all alone in my living room. A single tear rolled down my cheek and I swallowed back the lump raising in my throat. It took minutes before I could even breath. How could something so expected, hurt me so much? Before I had a chance to break down my mom walked in, as if she knew I was hurting. My mom always sensed when something was wrong. She said as a mother it's instinctual, I just thought of it as a sixth sense. "Honey, would you like to talk about it?" My mom leaned against the back of the sofa and rubbed my shoulder. It was impossible to respond right away. The lump in my throat kept returning. I swallowed the tears back one more time. It was only temporary so before it had a chance to return I managed to whisper "We're over." "I'm sorry sweetie. That boy isn't worth your time." She kissed my cheek and wrapped me up in a tight hug. "I just made some cookies for the church bake sale. If I'm not mistaken I made a few extra." A small smile appeared on her face and I couldn't help but smile back. I loved my mom but even I knew better than to trust her cooking. For her sake, and the sake of anyone who came over for dinner, it was a good thing my father was a chef. Not a professional one, but at least we could eat his cooking and live to tell the tale. With a small giggle I wiped my final tear away. "Mom, I really am not in the mood to die." She laughed along with me and pulled me off the couch and into the kitchen. "These are good, I promise." Hesitantly, I looked at the tray of cookies laying on the table. She was right. They weren't burnt and they actually smelled edible. I grabbed a cookie off the tray and held it up to my lips. Slowly, I opened my mouth and bit off a tiny piece. It was warm and sweet. The chocolate chips slowly melted on my tongue. My mom waited patiently for my critique. "These are amazing! When did you become so great at cooking?" She shrugged and walked back over to the counter. My eyes aimlessly scanned the room until something in the garbage caught my eye. Curious, I walked over to the trash can and my mom's head snapped up. "Um, I wouldn't go over there!" She yelled. Instead of stopping I got closer and sighed. "Seriously?" I asked with an eyebrow raised. Mom smiled innocently at the empty plastic bin in my hands. One that used to contain a dozen chocolate chip cookies. "Way to be." I chuckled. "Yeah well, my first batch didn't go so well. Anyway, Father Andrew probably prefers store-bought cookies than rancid poisonous ones. Right?" She had a point there. I doubt killing everyone at the church would go over well in confession. "Fine, you win. But these boxes are recyclable. You're lucky I saw these. It'd be a shame if my own mother took part in killing the environment." After throwing the boxes into the recyclable bin I went up to my room. I thought I was fine but once I shut the door and was surrounded by silence, I couldn't help but think about Darren. Did he ever really love me? He broke up with me because I didn't want to go all the way with him. Is that a reasonable excuse? Did he only stay with me in hopes that someday I'd crack? The questions flowing through my mind wouldn't stop. Question after question. Needless to say I didn't have the answer to any of them. moreOpen Question: Is this a good start to my book?
Being classified as the school good girl never was a problem for me. I made some great friends that accepted me, though our personalities were completely different and even began dating a great guy who for the most part respected the certain "limits" I had in our relationship. I could see in his eyes that he wanted more than I could give him and I knew it was only a matter of time before he decided that what we had wasn't enough. What I didn't know, was that that time would come so soon. "Katarina," Darren whispered with a frown. It was quite clear he was almost as upset about what was about to happen as I was. Maybe it was the way his voice cracked as he said my name, or maybe it was the way his deep brown eyes avoided mine. "I know what you're about to say," I whispered back. "Save yourself the trouble and just go home." "I'm sorry." He hung his head and rand his fingers through his hair. "You know I love you and you know I'd do anything for you but I can't keep waiting for you. Our relationship is going nowhere and I know you have limits but I don't." With a final hug he walked out my front door leaving me all alone in my living room. A single tear rolled down my cheek and I swallowed back the lump raising in my throat. It took minutes before I could even breath. How could something so expected, hurt me so much? Before I had a chance to break down my mom walked in, as if she knew I was hurting. My mom always sensed when something was wrong. She said as a mother it's instinctual, I just thought of it as a sixth sense. "Honey, would you like to talk about it?" My mom leaned against the back of the sofa and rubbed my shoulder. It was impossible to respond right away. The lump in my throat kept returning. I swallowed the tears back one more time. It was only temporary so before it had a chance to return I managed to whisper "We're over." "I'm sorry sweetie. That boy isn't worth your time." She kissed my cheek and wrapped me up in a tight hug. "I just made some cookies for the church bake sale. If I'm not mistaken I made a few extra." A small smile appeared on her face and I couldn't help but smile back. I loved my mom but even I knew better than to trust her cooking. For her sake, and the sake of anyone who came over for dinner, it was a good thing my father was a chef. Not a professional one, but at least we could eat his cooking and live to tell the tale. With a small giggle I wiped my final tear away. "Mom, I really am not in the mood to die." She laughed along with me and pulled me off the couch and into the kitchen. "These are good, I promise." Hesitantly, I looked at the tray of cookies laying on the table. She was right. They weren't burnt and they actually smelled edible. I grabbed a cookie off the tray and held it up to my lips. Slowly, I opened my mouth and bit off a tiny piece. It was warm and sweet. The chocolate chips slowly melted on my tongue. My mom waited patiently for my critique. "These are amazing! When did you become so great at cooking?" She shrugged and walked back over to the counter. My eyes aimlessly scanned the room until something in the garbage caught my eye. Curious, I walked over to the trash can and my mom's head snapped up. "Um, I wouldn't go over there!" She yelled. Instead of stopping I got closer and sighed. "Seriously?" I asked with an eyebrow raised. Mom smiled innocently at the empty plastic bin in my hands. One that used to contain a dozen chocolate chip cookies. "Way to be." I chuckled. "Yeah well, my first batch didn't go so well. Anyway, Father Andrew probably prefers store-bought cookies than rancid poisonous ones. Right?" She had a point there. I doubt killing everyone at the church would go over well in confession. "Fine, you win. But these boxes are recyclable. You're lucky I saw these. It'd be a shame if my own mother took part in killing the environment." After throwing the boxes into the recyclable bin I went up to my room. I thought I was fine but once I shut the door and was surrounded by silence, I couldn't help but think about Darren. Did he ever really love me? He broke up with me because I didn't want to go all the way with him. Is that a reasonable excuse? Did he only stay with me in hopes that someday I'd crack? The questions flowing through my mind wouldn't stop. Question after question. Needless to say I didn't have the answer to any of them. moreOpen Question: Right now my neighbor across the street is staring out her window at me?
I'm sitting on my porch using my laptop but she is watching me from behind her blinds. I am almost CERTAIN she is a liberal. Her Prius is parked out front and it has an obama bumper sticker, a stop global warming bumper sticker, and a Xed out W. I catch her a lot looking at me and I am certain she is plotting something. What can I do within my legal right to defend myself from her. She is a member of the HOA and i know FOR A FACT they talk about me in the meetings because I am a registered Republican. I am not going to start any battles but if I believe they are planning to threaten me in any way because of my political views than I have every right as an American to defend myself possibly preemptively too. What are your thoughts? How should i handle this situation. she is still eyeing me from behind her window now as i type this. i APPRECIATE your concern for my mental health but this woman has repeatedly come on to my property and violated my rights. First it was that I coundlt have an AC unit in my top floor window, next it was because I had installed a flag pole in my front lawn and was displaying an AMERICAN flag on it. This is america right? what sort of liberal nazis wont permit a citizen to show support for his country? and i know she is behind all of this, its always her eyeing me. she is documenting my movements, when i go outside, what im wearing when i leave the house. i wouldnt be surprised if she illegally enters my house when i am away at the store. for all i know my entire house is bugged and shes reading what im typing right now moreOpen Question: where do you place the trot pole in front of a jump?
how many feet infront of a small warm up jump do you place the trot pole? moreOpen Question: How is this excerpt from my novel? Be honest and burtal, please!?
this isn't the full thing, or the beginning, but i need feedback, so here it is! As I boarded the plane to Barbados, I couldn’t help but wonder what would lie ahead for me after the six hours of traveling. I wasn’t even sure how I was going to ask her, but I had enough time to figure it out. It wasn’t long before the memories of Cegueira Isle came flooding back to me. The first thing I felt as I awoke was warm, grainy sand. As I opened my eyes, all I could see were bright blue skies, not a cloud in sight. The sun was burning brightly above me, almost blinding me. A pair of deep emerald eyes blocked the sun as I jumped back instinctually. I watched as the woman move towards the water, prowling as if she were a leopard. Her long black hair was swaying in the wind, a bright smile illuminating her face. “You’re the first one to awake,” she said to me. “And you were the last.” She laughed a little, as if I was to know the meaning of her peculiar words. “Last?” I questioned her, my voice sounding utterly unstable. “Everything will make sense,” she turned to me, smiling still. “I promise it will.” I just nodded weakly as she continued to dance around in the water. It wasn’t long before the rest of the men awoke. When they finally did, the woman gathered us together, as she stood a beam of excitement in front of us. “Will you explain what the hell is going on?” Garrett provoked her, edginess to his voice that through her off guard. “So much fury for such a small man,” she smiled, patting him lightly on the head. I couldn’t help but burst into laughter, Garrett immediately stared me down, silencing me for a moment. As she took in a sigh, the woman sat down in the sand, her brows furrowed in a dispute of inner thought. “I guess I should start telling who I am. My name is Senalda.” After a minute of silence, she spoke again; her voice was soft as the words passed through her lips. “I’m happy that you are here with me. I used to live alone on this island, but now, we will be able to live her together; forever.” “If you don’t mind me asking, where exactly are we?” a timid David asked, his crimson hair covered with sand. “Cegueira Isle,” she answered, analyzing our faces. “It’s impossible to find. It seems it was.” “Then, won’t we be stuck here forever?” “Exactly,” a devious smile formed her lips, her eyes once again wild with excitement. “Together forever is what we will be, my friends.” “What do you exactly mean by forever?” I spoke for the first time since my awakening. “It’s only a matter of time until we die.” With another deep breath she stood, moving closer to us. “You don’t have to worry about death anymore, friends.” In the moment, we all looked to each other, a look of apprehension in our eyes. The words she spoke allowed for fear to enter my body, filling up every crevice. Looking back towards her, I watched her open her mouth to speak the words we we’re all dreading. “You’re immortal now.” The light of the moon shined brightly through the window of the plane as I reverted myself into reality. Tourists around me, preparing for their trips, continued to talk in strident voices. Yet, it was unconsciously easy to tune them all out. It wasn’t long before thoughts of my brothers entered my mind. i posted the unedited version by mistake, so there will be grammer mishaps and other such things... moreOpen Question: Recovering from molar extractions...?
I got my bottom left wisdom tooth and the molar in front of it pulled on Friday and my dentist has been closed all weekend, so I haven't been able to bug him with questions. How long should I continue with soft foods, just the 24 hours? Should I still feel a bit of throbbing soreness? I usually sleep on my stomach in bed but have been sleeping upright on the couch, is it safe to return to my bed yet? How often should I rinse with warm saline? If my breath is pretty terrible, despite brushing gently twice a day, is this normal? Any help is appreciated! To elaborate, I'm taking antibiotics and pain meds do absolutely nothing for me. I've googled everything I could about this, but came away unsatisfied...hence my post here. moreOpen Question: My dog is suddenly growling at people?
My dog's name is Melika and I've had her for almost 5 years now. She's a Yorkie. I don't walk her as much as I should. Only in warm weather. She's usually pretty good on the leash, except for jerking on the leash or stopping to smell stuff. I've been walking her daily for the last couple of days, and I don't know why but when I walk her around the neighborhood and there's people on their front porch and stuff she starts barking and growling and like her ears stand up and stuff. She's usually great with people and has never been unkind towards people. I'm trying to figure out why she's doing this since she didn't used to. I used to walk my other dog separately. But, sadly her leg and back are messed up and I may have to put her down soon. :(. Would that have something to do with why she's acting out on the leash? Also, what should I do to stop this. I always like say in like a stern voice "No!" and then like tug back on her leash. But, I don't think it makes a difference. Help please? Do you know why she'd be doing this? How can I stop it? moreResolved Question: My corn snake puked after trying to give her a thawed mouse?
It was my first attempt to give her a thawed mouse, i did a lot of research on how to do it, i did it perfectly thawed and warmed a little with hot water. When i was putting it in front of her with pair of tongues she went out of her hiding and without even striking at it or eating it she made a strange noise and puked. Her last meal was a little more than a week ago and she is one year old. Is this normal? Should i go to feed her live again? Dont tell me how to thaw a mouse again cause i have done A LOT of research on how to do it and even asked that question before. Wait, im not sure if she puked because i was turning around when she did it but i saw her opening her mouse really wide and moving from one side to the other so i assume she did because it doesnt look like poop Also can i handle her to clean the tank after she puked? or is this not good? As i said she ate more than a week ago. I don't think she is sick because i see no external signs of illness and she is active at night. Yea, its puke. And i left the mouse at room at room temperature for about 2 hours and then warmed it with hot water with a plastic bag for like 2 minutes. She had already pooped like 5 days after eating ( i've had her for two weeks so i dont know if that was from the last meal) but probably the prey was too big, i gave her a hopper and it was visible in her body after 3 days almost, does that mean the prey is too big for her? I'll take her to the vet i guess although i feel bad because ive only had her for a couple of weeks. moreOpen Question: Should i do this when i work out?
Right now i am working out monday, wednesday, and friday, sometimes saturdays also. However i am thinking about working out more often like M-F. Also when i work out should i wear like a sweatshirt? I heard when you sweat more you lose more weight? is that true? also i am starting to take my dog on a 30 min walk in the mornings, possibly every day, but if i don't i will make up for it at the gym. When i go to the gym this is what i do: Stretch warm up on the tread mill ( 1 lap at 2.5 to warm up and an incline at 2.0) Treadmill for 30 mins at a steady pace of 3.0-3.5 sometimes an incline sometimes not. Bike for 15 mins, Bench like 60 lbs. 20 reps. leg work 20 reps at 40 lbs ( work front and back of my legs 20 reps each) Sit ups 50 then a cool down of some stretches, and my walk back home (which is not even a minute away) So if i do this every other day or M-F, and take my dog on a 30 min walk, will i lose weight? also should i wear the sweatshirt? How often should i weigh myself? i do it like every day and im starting to get a little mad. so should i stop weighing myself everyday? i am also going to eat healthier when i go grocery shopping. ALSO should i do sit ups everyday? every other day? or should i weight until i lose the weight then do situps?? moreOpen Question: Should I change any thing from this? It's short, but with allot of spaces!!?
Sorry about spelling, I will be changing that!! This is in the middle of the book, just to let you know, they are sitting in a parking lot at 3 in the morning, don't ask why, It was explained before this part “Would you like to go next?” Marvin was leaning down towards me. “Ahh,” I paused for a moment, not quite sure if it was a good idea that I do. “Sure.” “Okay,” He turned to face Drew. “Mark is going next!” “Well that’s going to be fun to watch,” Brandon sat down by me were Zack was sitting before he left. “But until it’s your turn, we get to kick back and relax.” He lend back on the palms of his hands, and crossed his legs in front of him. “Nice,” I copied him, and tilted my head sideways to smile at him. He returned it with an even bigger smile, that made it feel like the night went away and the sun come out. “Awkward…” Marvin looked down at us with a look that a little kid would give to their parents when they were kissing, and with that fact, he turned around and started to make kissing noises. “Seriously?” Brandon turned to face Marvin. I let out a little chuckle, then turned my attention to Zack and Drew. I wasn’t quite sure what they were doing, but Zack had his eyes closed and was calling out numbers. “So maybe after your done we can, get to know each other,” Brandon was pacing me again. His warm smile complemented his red cheeks. “Ohhh…” Marvin said tauntingly. “Not that way you perv! I meant talk about our lives; She doesn’t even know our last names!” I felt my cheeks burn. I have never been in a conversation like this before. In fact, I’ve never really been in a conversation before, never the less a boy. “So, what would you like to know?” Brandon was still blushing a little. “Well, I don’t know. How about your guys last names and maybe your guy’s family?” I probably should have asked a different set of questions, but I wasn’t thinking. “I can handle that,” Marvin wheeled his chair over to the other side of me. “Okay, well my full name is Marvin Morge, and Zack’s is Hall and --” “Okay! Wow, I thought I was going to tell her.” Brandon cutted in. “Okay, you can say the rest,” Marvin held his hands up to say back off, I’ll stop, but he didn’t seem to mind. “Thank you. Okay Drew’s last name is Reaves and Jay’s and mine is Lee.” I could tell Brandon wanted another question. “Mark! Are you ready?” Drew was calling out for me. It was my turn. moreOpen Question: Did I do a decent job of describing what she looks like without going too far off base?
This is just a tid bit of my story: “Did I hurt you?” I notice she’s holding her wrist tenderly with her hand. “No, no,” she says quickly, shaking her head. “I’m alright. It’s just a scratch. My folder must have grazed me when everything fell.” She removes her hand to reveal that there is indeed a nice long, scratch on her arm. It’s not bleeding, but it’s red and fresh. Wonderful. Not only can I not go a day without making myself look like a total idiot in front of her, I’m a danger to her health as well. I start to apologize, but then realize I'll sound like a broken record if I do. “It’ll help if you put the cut in warm water. It’s what my mom does for my little brother.” I point to her arm. “It helps get rid of all the bacteria and stuff.” Bacteria and stuff? God I sound so lame right now. She smiles kindly and thanks me. “You welcome,” I respond, not being able to help staring at her. Maybe it’s being this close, but I’ve never noticed how light brown her eyes are…almost like honey. “You…have very nice eyes.” I say, immediately feeling stupid for doing so. “I never noticed before.” I add when she doesn’t respond. “Thank you,” she says with a small smile. She timidly rests her fingers in her soft wavy hair, which is pulled back into a bun with a matching black clip. “I’ve…got to go,” she says, pointing in a general direction indicating her next class. “Class…finals…” The two minute bell rings just as she says the words, and she walks away quickly, disappearing around the corner. Can you give me any advice as far as the dialogue/desription might go? :) moreResolved Question: I'm doubting myself and wondering whether I should do this or not..?
I'm supposed to participate in a 4th of July parade on a float that represents my school. Every year kids from the music department play music on the float. When I went to the rehearsal yesterday, not only was I the only freshman (considering the 09-10 year), but I was also the only one who came straight out of beginning band (lowest level), so I only knew how to play one song out of the entire set list. =/ Sure, I knew a few people, my cousin was there too, but I didn't have someone who I could actually hold up a conversation with. I felt super embarrassed, because I only played the warm-up and one song for the whole rehearsal, which lasted two hours. I feel like I contributed nothing at all to the band. Part of me wants to participate because I've always dreamed of representing my school at some big event. I've dreamed about it since I was in 7th grade, playing my instrument, seeing lots of people cheer. The other part of me wants to give it up because I feel like a fool knowing only how to play one song with a bunch of other extremely talented people surrounding me. SKIP HERE IF YOU HATE READING: I'm gonna be in a 4th of July parade. I wanna quit because I only know how to play one song in the whole set list, due to me still being fresh out of the beginning class. I wanna stay because it's been my dream to play an instrument in front of a large, cheering crowd, and no one in the band minds me being there or the level I play at. What should I do? moreResolved Question: I'm doubting myself and wondering whether I should go through with this or not..?
I'm supposed to participate in a 4th of July parade on a float that represents my school. Every year kids from the music department play music on the float. When I went to the rehearsal yesterday, not only was I the only freshman (considering the 09-10 year), but I was also the only one who came straight out of beginning band (lowest level), so I only knew how to play one song out of the entire set list. =/ Sure, I knew a few people, my cousin was there too, but I didn't have someone who I could actually hold up a conversation with. I felt super embarrassed, because I only played the warm-up and one song for the whole rehearsal, which lasted two hours. I feel like I contributed nothing at all to the band. Part of me wants to participate because I've always dreamed of representing my school at some big event. I've dreamed about it since I was in 7th grade, playing my instrument, seeing lots of people cheer. The other part of me wants to give it up because I feel like a fool knowing only how to play one song with a bunch of other extremely talented people surrounding me. SKIP HERE IF YOU HATE READING: I'm gonna be in a 4th of July parade. I wanna quit because I only know how to play one song in the whole set list, due to me still being fresh out of the beginning class. I wanna stay because it's been my dream to play an instrument in front of a large, cheering crowd, and no one in the band minds me being there or the level I play at. What should I do? moreResolved Question: What should I change?
Sorry about spelling, I will be changing that!! This is in the middle of the book, just to let you know, they are sitting in a parking lot at 3 in the morning, don't ask why, It was explained before this part “Would you like to go next?” Marvin was leaning down towards me. “Ahh,” I paused for a moment, not quite sure if it was a good idea that I do. “Sure.” “Okay,” He turned to face Drew. “Mark is going next!” “Well that’s going to be fun to watch,” Brandon sat down by me were Zack was sitting before he left. “But until it’s your turn, we get to kick back and relax.” He lend back on the palms of his hands, and crossed his legs in front of him. “Nice,” I copied him, and tilted my head sideways to smile at him. He returned it with an even bigger smile, that made it feel like the night went away and the sun come out. “Awkward…” Marvin looked down at us with a look that a little kid would give to their parents when they were kissing, and with that fact, he turned around and started to make kissing noises. “Seriously?” Brandon turned to face Marvin. I let out a little chuckle, then turned my attention to Zack and Drew. I wasn’t quite sure what they were doing, but Zack had his eyes closed and was calling out numbers. “So maybe after your done we can, get to know each other,” Brandon was pacing me again. His warm smile complemented his red cheeks. “Ohhh…” Marvin said tauntingly. “Not that way you perv! I meant talk about our lives; She doesn’t even know our last names!” I felt my cheeks burn. I have never been in a conversation like this before. In fact, I’ve never really been in a conversation before, never the less a boy. “So, what would you like to know?” Brandon was still blushing a little. “Well, I don’t know. How about your guys last names and maybe your guy’s family?” I probably should have asked a different set of questions, but I wasn’t thinking. “I can handle that,” Marvin wheeled his chair over to the other side of me. “Okay, well my full name is Marvin Morge, and Zack’s is Hall and --” “Okay! Wow, I thought I was going to tell her.” Brandon cutted in. “Okay, you can say the rest,” Marvin held his hands up to say back off, I’ll stop, but he didn’t seem to mind. “Thank you. Okay Drew’s last name is Reaves and Jay’s and mine is Lee.” I could tell Brandon wanted another question. “Mark! Are you ready?” Drew was calling out for me. It was my turn. moreVoting Question: what do you think of my story so far?
so this is what i have so far... Millions of different thoughts raced through my mind all at once. “We should have left the party earlier. If Taylor had just listened to me instead of partying like it was new years eve then we could have been at home right now, sitting in front of a warm fire, sipping warn hot chocolate. Not walking home in the freezing, winter evening. We’re not even supposed to be walking this far from home this late. It’s already 9:50, there’s no friggan way we're going to make it home in time for curfew! All humans are supposed to be heading home by 9:30 and in their homes by 10:00, because at 10:00, the vampires were permitted to live their lives in the same streets that the humans were permitted to live their lives in the daylight hours. It has been that way for 20 years. That was the law, and a damn good one too. It is easier for everyone if humans and vampires don’t interact with one another anymore. Years of wars and past conflict prove that. Oh god, what would happen to a human caught out after curfew by a blood thirsty vampire? I suppose something terrible would happen. Something terrible like..." I was quickly pulled out of thought when I tripped on the uneven, icy sidewalk. I prepared myself for the pain, but strangely, it didn’t come. I looked up; Taylor had caught me just in time. I looked down again, to where her hands were. Her arms were under mine; her hands were on my breasts….awkward. When she didn’t let go I felt I should say something. “Um…Taylor…could you, maybe…” “Oh! Oh, uh…sorry, sorry.” She stammered, and slowly helped me up. We stood there in a very awkward silence. I wasn’t sure if I should say something, or if I should just start walking again. I decided I should probably say something, but when I looked at her face, I could see how red it was, and how embarrassed she must have been. So I decided that an awkward silence was better than awkward small talk. We stood there for a few more seconds before she said, “Uh, we should probably start walking again….curfew, you know.” I could only nod. I didn’t know if she saw it or not though, because she just started walking ahead of me. I figured I should probably start walking too, but not before I checked my cell phone for the time. It read 9:56. I cussed under my breathe. If I was going to tell Taylor my secret, I figured I should probably tell her now, seeing as in about four minutes we would become a vampire’s next meal. I jogged to catch up with her, being very careful not to slip on any ice patches. I tried talking but no words came out. How should I say this? Should I just come out and say it? Or should I try to explain to her not to let this bother her so we could stay friends? I had known Taylor Rutherford since I was three years old, and I knew her family well. Rich, mostly stuck up, thinking they were better than everyone else, and in a way they were. They were also very intolerant about certain things, one of those things being gay people. Knowing this I decided to tell Taylor that I was a lesbian anyways, she was surprisingly cool about it, thank god. If I lost her as a friend I don’t know what I would do. In all the years I had known her I had always thought of her as just a friend….up until a few months ago. I started to develop a huge crush on her, and I had been debating whether or not I should tell her. I decided to wait a little bit to see if the feelings went away, they didn’t. If anything they got stronger. So I decided to get it over with and tell her. If she could look past it then, cool. If she was too bothered by it to hang out with me anymore, well that was not so cool. But she deserved to know, and I needed it off of my chest. I was so nervous; my heart was beating so fast I thought it might break through my rib cage. I dared a quick glance at her face, it was still kind of red, maybe I should just wait…”No,” I told myself. “No more waiting. Your opportunity is now, take it. There’s no going back. You wanted to tell her so tell her, now.” I took a deep breath and said, “Taylor I…” But she didn’t let me finish, instead she stood right in front of me, I skidded to a stop. “Before you say anything, I have something important to tell you,” she said. I only nodded, afraid my voice would show how nervous I was. “Ash….I love you,” she simply stated. I was sure I felt my jaw hit the sidewalk. Was I hearing her correctly? Did she really just tell me she loved me??? When I didn’t say anything she started to speak again. “I’ve sort of had a crush on you…for a while now. I just, wasn’t sure how you felt about me so I kept my mouth shut. And, I also wasn’t really sure what to think of it, you’re the first girl that has made me feel this way, it was so different. Please, say something…anything.” I wanted to so badly, but I couldn’t make my mouth move, I was still in shock. She actually liked me back! Still not totally finding my words, I did the only other thing I could think to do. I looked her moreVoting Question: BACK VENTS IN VAN A/C BLOWS WARM AIR?
The A/C works fine in the front of the car. Intermittently it blows warm air from the 4 back vents. This is the strangest part --> Sometimes one of them will work ok in the back and sometimes they all blow warm air! It's a 2003 Chrysler Town and Country and it has two back rows. I even just got a brand new entire a/c system in the car so it's not a freon problem. Any clue on what this might be and if so how much it would cost to repair? I just went to the shop and he blew out the tubing? He said there might be a blockage and he got most of it out? It's now blowing coolish air, but not cold. Does this mean the tube does not have a hole in it? He said it might be the rear evaporator or rear compressor? Not sure which he said. moreResolved Question: This Section? (different form the 2 paragraph one)?
“Would you like to go next?” Marvin was leaning down towards me. “Ahh,” I paused for a moment, not quite sure if it was a good idea that I do. “Sure.” “Okay,” He turned to face Drew. “Mark is going next!” “Well that’s going to be fun to watch,” Brandon sat down by me were Zack was sitting before he left. “But until it’s your turn, we get to kick back and relax.” He lend back on the palms of his hands, and crossed his legs in front of him. “Nice,” I copied him, and tilted my head sideways to smile at him. He returned it with an even bigger smile, that made it feel like the night went away and the sun come out. “Awkward…” Marvin looked down at us with a look that a little kid would give to their parents when they were kissing, and with that fact, he turned around and started to make kissing noises. “Seriously?” Brandon turned to face Marvin. I let out a little chuckle, then turned my attention to Zack and Drew. I wasn’t quite sure what they were doing, but Zack had his eyes closed and was calling out numbers. “So maybe after your done we can, get to know each other,” Brandon was pacing me again. His warm smile complemented his red cheeks. “Ohhh…” Marvin said tauntingly. “Not that way you perv! I meant talk about our lives; She doesn’t even know our last names!” I felt my cheeks burn. I have never been in a conversation like this before. In fact, I’ve never really been in a conversation before, never the less a boy. “So, what would you like to know?” Brandon was still blushing a little. “Well, I don’t know. How about your guys last names and maybe your guy’s family?” I probably should have asked a different set of questions, but I wasn’t thinking. “I can handle that,” Marvin wheeled his chair over to the other side of me. “Okay, well my full name is Marvin Morge, and Zack’s is Hall and --” “Okay! Wow, I thought I was going to tell her.” Brandon cutted in. “Okay, you can say the rest,” Marvin held his hands up to say back off, I’ll stop, but he didn’t seem to mind. “Thank you. Okay Drew’s last name is Reaves and Jay’s and mine is Lee.” I could tell Brandon wanted another question. “Mark! Are you ready?” Drew was calling out for me. It was my turn. moreVoting Question: Why is it getting colder every year?
I live in the Bay Area, eastbay, and it's been getting colder and colder every year. I remember the summer of 06 I would take off all my clothing while indoors and i'd still slightly sweaty. But now I'm covered in bedsheets in front of my computer 7AM in the morning, it isn't even that much warmer in the afternoon! Is there a chance of it getting significantly warmer again within the next 2 years? If not, should I just invest all my money in outerwear? LOL How's it lookin' down south in Santa Barbara, LA, and SD? moreVoting Question: How can we cope with a neighbour who constantly watches us deliberately intimidates me, by walking across my f?
This person has issues and we have been to the police who are aware of his problems although we are not. He appears to have some sort of web cam on his front door enabling to watch our comings and goings. His 6/7 year old son lives with him, no wife divorced. He plays loud music if we are in the back garden on warm evenings, our house is terraced and privately owned. The evironmental department has also ;been involved for the past two years with tape recorders to rocord the bangings and door slamming in the early hours, but now say ther is nothing they can do because the noise is not loud enough , evn though we cannot hear ourselves speak at time. He seems to have insomnia so is up most of the night and day straing and watching and annoying us and some of our neighbours. We are told there is nothing we can do except take him to court which we cannot afford to do at the moment. How can our quality of life improve, how can we put a stop to this constant barrage of intimidation. We would be grateful for any help or suggestions that may hep us. The neighbour has point blank rejected any kind of help to sort this problem out and it seems is allowed to carry on making our lives hell. moreResolved Question: What could be wrong with A/C?
'00 Ford Contour SE. The A/C. started blowing warm air, So I bought a 18.0z can of freon with A.C synthetic booster and followed instructions to put it in. I was told when I connect the hose and the needle on the gauge starts moving around that means the compressor clutch is engaged and compressor is running. I emptied the can of freon into the service port. The air started getting cold but After about 30 minutes the air went back to plain warm air from the fan.What could be the problem here? One more question: How do i find out how many oxygen sensors I have? I went to get the check engine light code at auto zone. After they scan for the code, they said it was bank 1 sensor 2. the diagram showed bank one sensor two was between the exhaust manifold and cat converter, but a mechanic says the car just has two sensors, one up in front of the engine and one behind the cat converter - which one is correct? Thank you. moreVoting Question: What evidence WOULD be considered proof of AGW, or any slow-moving environmental problem?
How could scientists present evidence for anthropogenic global warming in a way that convinces those who resist the very concept of man-made environmental problems? Would it have to be written at a grade-school level, or read in a Texas accent to remove the "elitist" tone? Do "skeptics" understand that the science will never be that simple because the climate is too complex? It will never be something that Rush Limbaugh can condense into 5 minutes, or even 5 hours. Those "Climategate" emails were fragments taken out of context from a much larger set of data. You can't dumb-down this topic like a win/lose football score. In other words, aside from bodies on Main Street USA tomorrow morning, how can scientists convince Fox News junkies that a looming problem, with worst-case scenarios decades away, is something to be concerned about right now? With older "hoaxes" like man-made ozone depletion and acid rain, it was relatively easy to fix the problem with technology (newer refrigerants and smokestack scrubbers). It was done without major shifts in economy activity and deniers eventually backed off. Oil and coal however, are too embedded in the economy for us to phase out CO2 emissions without bringing Dittoheads on board. They tend to drive the biggest vehicles, for one thing. It seems there would have to be a single event, like thousands of dead Americans from a single heat-wave, to thaw conservative minds. That might not even convince them, since they keep ignoring melting polar/glacial ice and harping on cool days in Tyler TX or Al Gore's personal escapades. How does science combat polls that show half of Americans still believe in Biblical Creation, while claiming to be all about "sound science" when disturbing evidence cramps their style? You people know who you are. What EXACTLY is needed to convince you of the validity of slow-moving environmental dangers? Simpler language? Larger fonts? Drowned corpses in your own front yard? What will it take? moreVoting Question: Do you like my book so far?
(its not finished but it would mean alot to me if you read it and gave me FEEDBACK! like not just it was good but tell me what was good or dont just say it was bad say what was bad.) My Teddy Bear I feel your breath on the back of my neck, it’s a steady pace that gives me the goose bumps, the sound of your heart beat fills my ears. As I thought to myself I noticed your movement. You looked to see if I was awake, which I am and so you whisper in my ear softly “go back to sleep… I will be here when you wake up.” I nod my head slightly and close my eyes. A few hours later I awaken with my heart skipping a beat. I quickly turn your way, my head snuggling under your chest, my nose write against your abs they felt strong. My arms and legs shivering from being cold, your arms quickly hug my body instantly warming me. You were always warm, you never got cold, but one thing I knew for sure is that you made me feel SAFE. It makes me feel like I‘m a little kid again snuggling with my teddy bear. “I’m right here, I am not leaving I promise.” you said in a cute way. At that moment I realized how much in love I am with you. As I thought to myself how lucky I was because all the girls in my school are extremely in love with two boys in the whole school and that would be Seth Jameson he is 16, the complete jock of the school he is 5’6, very strong he has a 6 pack, pale skin, dirty blonde hair, green eyes then there is Kellen Baxton he is 16, 5‘6-5‘7, some what tan, brown hair, blue eyes, and the strongest guy in our grade he has an 8 pack. Girls would do anything to be with either of them. But I didn’t have to do anything, other then to be myself. I was Kellen’s, he was mine. We are meant to be together, its like we share one soul but its living in two bodies. My thoughts were interrupted when Kellen started running his fingers threw my blonde hair. A single tear ran down my face as I remembered the first time we met. It was Jenna’s birthday party we all went roller skating and she invited you. I wasn’t to good with roller skating I was more of an ice skater. I kept falling, that’s when you noticed me, I fell for the last time and you helped me up the rest of the time you never let go of my hand not one time. Even after we took off our roller skates you didn’t let go of my hand we walked around the area and found a pizza place. You bought the pizza even though I begged for me to buy it. My hair slightly fell in front of my face and you ran your fingers threw my hair to push it back. You wiped the single tear that ran down my cheek. Your skin so soft and smooth I want to cry more but I knew I couldn’t, just not with you here. But I couldn’t hold it any longer the tears started to come, you sat upright seeing what was the matter. I sat up with you and when you saw I was crying you just sat on the bed wrapping me in a hug you never said a word… just a hug. Which is what I needed. I looked at my cell phone and I had one new text message from Leo sent at 2:01a.m. Leo is one of my best guy friends he is 5’7, very pale, and very skinny but strong, he has light brown hair, and light blue eyes. Kellen doesn’t like me being friends with Leo because Leo has had a huge crush on me since I moved here. Leo honestly doesn’t like Kellen either but that’s because Kellen has me and Leo doesn’t. The text message read “You up beautiful? I would like to talk with you. -xoxo Leo” I reply to the text message with a simple “hello” that was sent at 2:43a.m. Kellen saw the text that Leo sent me and I felt his body temperature rise even more, if that was even possible. “Why does he do this? He knows you and I are a couple he doesn’t need to call you beautiful or end his text messages with xoxo. Those are things I need to be doing!” Kellen said very angry like. “Kell, its all right, he is just jealous of you.” I say trying to calm him down. Kellen stood up quickly he was pacing back and forth he was shirtless and had on a pair of comfy long pants that looked warm. You could tell his whole body was tense, I stood up and stopped him from pacing I stood on my tippy toes and leaned in for a kiss. You smiled and kissed me back. I whisper in your ear softly “may I have your comfy pants please,” I said with a huge smile on my face. I could tell you weren’t surprised I asked you that cause you knew I loved wearing some of your clothes to bed. As You took off your pants I looked away now you were shirtless and only in boxers, as I took off my comfy shorts you looked away so I could slip on your pants. I was also wearing one of your shirts you gave me, since it was a little big I had to use a pony tail and tie it in the back. You walked over to your bag and took out another pair of pants I started to laugh “You knew I would take those pants didn’t you?!” “Well it was a just in case moment.” That is one reason why I love Kellen Baxton he makes me laugh, and its not one of those fake laughs it was a real laugh. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “How tal moreResolved Question: 2 year old girl screams with diaper changes?
My daughter is 26 months old. She poops about 3 times a day, and HATES having poopy diapers changed. Especially as her poop tends to always go up the front and she hates us wiping the front part. She also refuses to tell us she has pooped until we smell it, and by then she's sat on it, and smooshed it all up front. GRRR.. We have tried to start potty training, because we were hoping it would help keep her bottom from hurting (and eliminate the gross mess of poopy diapers.) She loves to sit on the potty, but refuses to go to the bathroom there. She will get up, get a diaper on and immediately go on the diaper. Even if I leave her bare-bottomed for several hours, she will just hold it until she has a diaper on. Treats, bribery, water running, playing in warm water, toys, books, nothing seems to get her to "go" in the potty. So, I would love any suggestions you have for: 1-Is there any way to keep the poop from going up front? 2-How do you keep your toddler from kicking and crying when you wipe her front parts? 3-How do you get your child to actual "go" on the toilet? moreResolved Question: One of my track coaches hates me and I am getting so sick of it?
Ok, first of all I want to say thanks if you read this and leave a helpful answer! :) Well, I go to an athletics/track group twice a week. Its kind of just for fun, we just do some running and some field stuff as well. We do compete sometimes but its all light hearted. There are a few coaches who look after out group. One of the coaches is this girl who is about 17. When she first started helping out I didn't even really notice her. But then as time went on I noticed she seemed to really hate me for some reason. You know, just like little things? Like she would put all my friends in one group and leave me on my own. Or she would pick on me even if I did one thing wrong. I had no idea why because I had never been rude to her, I had only spoken to her a few times! Once when we were doing relays I didn't realize it was my turn to run so I ran late and she got so mad at me for not doing it right. She started telling me off in front of the other kids and said if I couldn't be bothered to try then I could just go home. I was really annoyed because I do try hard even though Im not very good at running. So I told her "not to shout at me" and "don't tell me to go home". Ever since I stood up to her she has hated me even more. Two days ago we were doing warming up exercises. One of my friends had hurt her ankle and was sitting out so while it wasn't my turn to warm up I went over to my friend to see how she was. I talked to her for a little bit and then realied I had missed my turn to run. The coach called my name really viciously and told me to come over and do it. She was like "You have to go and do it on your own now." And she watched me really nastily as I did the warming up. I know it doesn't sound bad but its the way she says it. She literally gets so angry and its so unfair because I have never done anything to her and I do try! Just sometimes I accidentally dont do it right! Im nearly 15 so she's only like 2yrs older then me so i also find it harder to take such mean behaviour from her because that would be like one of my friends mouthing me off! She really ruins athletics now, I used to really enjoy it! I know I sound like a baby but I can usually handle these kind of things but its really upsetting me. Should I tell my mum? Should I ask her to have a word with one of the other older coaches? Should I fight back and stand up for myself? Or would that be rude as she IS the coach? Please help! xxx @court person I am dyslexic and get easily distracted and unintentionally do things wrong. I really do try my best and this bitch of coach talks to me like I am a bit of dirt. @court person You are being harsh because you obviously don't realise what its like to be dyslexic. How would you like it if you were trying your very best and poeple constantly were telling you that you weren't trying hard enough?? And I never tell anyone I'm dyslexic...I never talk about it. So I dont use it as an excuse. No one knows Im dyslexic... I just deal with it and try my best. Please don't be so judgemental. moreResolved Question: Help with a Drill course?
I have 2 questions, its kinda long. I apologize. My barn is celebrating their 40th anniversary since they have opened &+ to raise money for our new IEA team. We are doing a drill team to show the public what we can do! We had our second practice yesterday, It was our first one on horseback. I do not own my own horse so my friend decided she would lend me her horse to use( she barley rides him): ) I got to the barn about an hour before the practice should begin, and i groomed him. and tacked up.I got on to warm him up and work him down since he had not been ridden since i rode him 2 days previous. I had never ridden him outside because they say he spooks a lot. I decided i would try him outside with everyone else. I rode him in trot and canter for about 20 mins and he was just perfect! We began the practice and he began to throw his head a lot and jolt a bit. His trot was speeding up a lot, so i half-halted him and then he just started bucking crazy for about 10 seconds. He did this three more times through out the practice. The horse in front of us was doing the same thing, he did it a few seconds after she began to. Could he be scared? I am wondering how i could maybe get him to stop jolting and bucking. I know working him down before the practice is something i should do. My second question is about a part in the course. We do these circles when we are in single file, and there is a point in the circles where my horse bucks. Then after he bucks i am really really far behind where i am suppose to be and he wont speed up anymore. So i kinda mess up that whole part of the course. Advice. The part of the course is where we go left and do a 30 meter circle, then a 20 meter circle, then a 10 meter circle, then we do a sharp right turn in and do the circles right. Usually about where we start the 10 meter circle is where my horse bucks. Sorry if this is confusing /: moreVoting Question: How to get rid of/hide hickeys?
I've got a very large one in a very noticeable spot on my neck. I can't hide it with my hair and it's too warm out to wear a scarf. Is there any way I can make it less noticeable? Cover-up wont work because I am insanely fair, so the only concealer I have is already two shades darker than my face (they don't make any concealer light enough for me), and my neck is significantly lighter than my face. I'm supposed to be going to a movie tonight and I can't even walk around my house like this! I'm looking for home remedies since I don't have money at the moment and can't exactly leave the house with a huge hickey on the front of my neck. moreResolved Question: Short extract from my story, advice needed? 10 points?
This is the end of my preface and the start of chapter one. (not the end of the chapter). If anyone could point out any mistakes, misspellings or grammar issues, please let me know. Any critiqueing is welcome :) Thank you I come to an intersection and while waiting for the light to turn green, I imagine what my life would be like if we had never moved. Picturing the serene hills of the countryside and the beautiful sunrise in the mornings, I want nothing more than to go back there, to my normal and happy life. The light changes and I move into the intersection. Suddenly, I hear a roaring engine and screeching tires. I look up and see a large truck swerving towards me, its headlights growing closer. It is too late and I scream. I brace myself for the pain from metal crashing against metal. But there is nothing. Just silence. Chapter 1 The morning sky is painted a serene portrait of pink melting into yellow and vivid red. As the sun rises from behind the mountains, light dances across the field of wheat and casts a golden glow that shimmers through the air. In the midst of the vast yellow sea stands a single tree on which I now sit. Gazing up at the sky, the moon is still visible in the soft glow of the sun. I smile to myself. The air is warm with a slight breeze that caresses my long brown hair. Above me, an apple hangs loosely to a branch and I pluck it off. Biting into it, memories of when I first discovered this spot of paradise escapes me. There seems to be something special about this place, something so simple and thought-provoking. I use this time to think. Every other hour of the day is filled with people who believe there’s no need to wonder when everything’s so perfect. What more could I want? With a sigh, I finish my apple and jump down off the low tree branch. It’s time to start the day. My mind wanders through the possibilities. I could sign up for a hike in the East Mountains, go for a walk through town, or maybe…my mind rejects the idea. The forest is off-limits to everyone. Its unmarked land could be dangerous. Besides, the sheer darkness of it isn’t the most welcoming sight. I shake the thought out of my head. Instead, I choose to go into town, though I doubt anyone will be up at this hour. It’s a short walk up north from the field and so I arrive before long. The vintage buildings loom overhead, blocking out the bit of morning light that’s trying to shine through. Street lamps still burn from being lit the night before and the black cobblestone road gleams in reflection. Stretching out in front of me is row upon row of diners, shops, theatres, and stands. Each painted a glorious red and gold color, almost as if to match the colors of the sunrise. No matter how many times I visit the city, it never ceases to amaze me with its timeless beauty. moreResolved Question: 10 points - advice on my story please?
This is part of my first chapter. I know it's a lot of description to some people, but it is needed to set the story in place. So please no comments on that. But any editing/advice on my writing and the story itself would be greatly appreciated. Thanks Chapter 1 The morning sky is painted a serene portrait of pinks, yellows, and vivid reds. As the sun rises from behind the mountains, light dances across the field of wheat and casts a golden glow that shimmers through the air. In the midst of the vast yellow sea stands a single tree in which I now sit. Gazing up at the sky, the moon is still visible in the dim glow of the sun. I smile to myself. The air is warm with a slight breeze that caresses my long brown hair. Above me, an apple hangs loosely to a branch and I pluck it off. Biting into it, memories of when I first discovered this spot of paradise escapes me. There seems to be something special about this place, something so simple and thought-provoking. I use this time to think. Every other hour of the day is filled with people who believe there’s no need to wonder when everything’s so perfect. What more could I want? With a sigh, I finish my apple and jump down off the low tree branch. It’s time to start the day. My mind wanders through the options. I could sign up for a hike in the East Mountains, go for a walk through town, or maybe…my mind rejects the idea. The forest is off-limits to everyone. Its unmarked land could be dangerous. Besides, the sheer darkness of it isn’t the most welcoming sight. I shake the thought out of my head. Instead, I choose to go into town, though I doubt anyone will be up at this hour. It’s a short walk up north from the field and so I arrive shortly. The vintage buildings loom overhead, blocking out the bit of morning light that’s trying to shine through. Street lamps still burn from being lit the night before and the black cobblestone road gleams in reflection. Stretching out in front of me is row upon row of diners, shops, theatres, and stands. Each painted a glorious red and gold color, almost as if to match the colors of the sunrise. No matter how many times I visit the city, it never ceases to amaze me with its timeless beauty. I walk down the street, glancing into windows as I pass. Occasionally I spot a worker or two setting up shop and they smile or wink at me. I simply wave back and continue on my way. The sun is mounting higher in the sky. It shouldn’t be too long until the streets become crowded. Suddenly, I’m hit with a wave of fatigue. Waking up before the sun every morning seems to be taking its toll on me. With a yawn, I find a single black bench perched in front of an Ice-cream Shoppe. I sit down and tilt my head up towards the sky, closing my eyes. I will myself to relax. Sounds of the city coming to life jolts me awake. Startled, I jump up off the bench and look around. The streets are filled with people going about their mornings. Children run ahead of their mothers, eager to get to wherever they are going. An elderly woman stops to purchase a loaf of bread from a baker at his stand. He smiles at her. She takes the loaf and rips a small piece off the edge, tossing it to a plump gray pigeon that gladly gobbles it up. Looking up, the sun is higher than I expect. It must be almost noon. I laugh at myself for dozing off for so long. I must have been more tired than I thought. For a moment, I recall seeing a flashing red light, growing closer and closer as everything goes dark. It must have been a dream, I tell myself. I shove the memory out of my head. If it was almost noon then that meant my friends would be at the store down the street. @ Milieu: Where am I telling more than showing?? I've been working on that, so I'm curious. And I apologise, I didn't mean to paste in the last paragraph. I wrote that the other day and never went over it or edited it, so it won't make much sense. The red light was my idea to relate to something from the preface. Also, there's tons of dialogue throughout the story, including before this chapter in the preface. I just need this chapter for description to introduce this world. Ok, so the preface is about a girl getting into a car accident. It has tons of action and dialogue through out it, I'm not just introducing this world, I'm trying to show how perfect it is. The character is within a dream where it's almost exactly like the real world, just perfect. That's why it sounds normal. Right after where I left off is when action and dialogue comes in. moreVoting Question: Can you tell me what you think of my story so far?
Ok, so I'm not done yet, but tell me what you think. Thank youu! Oh, and sorry it's so long:) My parents chatted in the kitchen as I sat in the living room letting the sun that shined through the windows burn my retinas while I stared at the black screen of the TV. I didn’t even care that I could be blind after this, actually I didn’t care about anything anymore. Nothing was right, nothing was like it was supposed to be, now that they took him out of my life. My mom and dad weren’t really chatting, more like talking in an angry tone. They went back and forth and back and forth, arguing about me, about them, about how the world is ruining me, and blah, blah, blah. “We have to lock the doors, and all the windows, but we have to make sure that she stays in our sight all day long except for school. She’s only got a week and a half left, it’s her senior year, we can’t let this ruin her last and final year in school.” I grunted quietly to myself. How can they say that? They knew how I felt and yet they talk about me like what I think is completely different then what I really think. Are all parents like that, or just mine? I got up from the warm, soft couch where I had been sitting every since I got home from the police station. I had had enough of my parents, they weren’t going to listen to me, not that they had before this happened. But of course when I tell them something I really mean, they don’t believe me. They don’t believe that I actually loved him, that I actually cared for someone besides my gay best friend who I had protected since kindergarten. No, I couldn’t care for anyone! That wasn’t me, it was an act. An act they think I’m still playing and let me tell you, I’m playing it well. They thought my only friend was Damien, he was the only one I would jump in front of a bullet to save. But this was different. They were right, that before I met him, that’s all I cared for, but I can make room for more. I went to go up the stairs and hide in the comfort of my own room where I spent endless hours lately. But, my dad caught me before I even touched the second step. “Um, Tara, can you come here for a second. Your mom and I wanna talk to you about something.” I rolled my eyes without him seeing and stepped away from the only things keeping me away from silence and safety. “If it’s about the same thing that you talk to me about every. single. time. Then I don’t really wanna hear it. Don’t bother!” I think my tone startled him, but I was pissed now. I hate hearing the same thing repeated to me over and over again. It’s just as pointless as running over a box of doughnuts with a Jeep.“No, it’s not about…we want to talk to you about your plans after high school. Well, you are welcome to stay with us for as long as you want, but we just want you to know that me and your mother have decided to move away.” They looked at me like I was supposed to be excited. I was the same, I felt the same as I did before and I kept the same frown on my face, showing no emotion to their ditch-this-town-when-we-can idea. “Um, to where do you plan on going?” I sounded like an angry mother after hearing her daughter is going to run away with her boyfriend who thinks he will start a band, you know? My mom and dad look at each other while smiles formed on their face. They looked like terrorists in a room full of weapons. They were exploding with excitement. At the same time they shot out, “Shortsville!” No muscles moved on my face. “What the hell’s a Shortsville?” Mom laughed her devil-turned-angel laugh. “Shortsville is a place honey! It’s in New York. A cute little town situated between Canandaigua and Manchester. I think.” Oh, that helped me know where it was! Now it was clear…not. I turned around to go up the stairs, but my mom grabbed me by my arm. “Wait! Where are you going? Aren’t you proud of us?” They wanted me to be proud of them? “Um…for what? You’re leaving a town just because something happened that you blew completely out of proportion! If you ask me, you guys are kind-of quitters! When the going gets rough, you get going! Why is that? You’re supposed to be a leader, but I know damn well, that I would never, ever, EVER, be you like you guys!!” On that good note, I turned around and ran up the stairs, leaving no time for any more stray arms to stop me. So I was mad. So I was furious. So what? I should be! They ruin my life, they take the one thing in my life that I actually wanted! Why wouldn’t I be mad?When I got to my room, I grabbed a back-pack and stuffed clothes in it. I decided that tonight would be the right night to catch up with the latest news from Damien. I climbed out my window and into the large tree that grew next to it and made my way down. Damien only lived a few streets over, I could be there in 10 minutes. I called Damien to make sure my surprise attack wouldn‘t scare him. “Hey, you home?” I heard voices in the background and some loud laughing. “No, Ter- wait, why? Are you running again? Loo Look, I told you, you’re 18 now. Your ‘rents can call the po-po on you and then you’ll be joining your friend- oh, um, sorry. Hun, you know where the key is. Wait in my room ‘til I get home. I think I’ll be there soon, this party can’t go all night,” I heard him call out, “Mom get off the table.” He came back on, “Ok, so maybe it can.” I laughed for the first time in a while, “Momma found her buddy alcohol didn’t she?” Damien sighed on the other end, “Yeah, unfortunately. Dad’s no where to be found so I guess I’m the designated driver tonight.” “Damien, you don’t have your license.” In fact, he had failed the test nineteen times in a row. Driving wasn’t his, how does he put it, it’s not his cup of tea. But whatever, he doesn’t even like tea. “Well, the only people who know that is you and the men in blue. If I keep the windows rolled up and locked and the doors are secure, I think they’ll be fine. I’m not sure if seatbelts can hold them. You know what they say, “chains couldn’t hold in Hercules.” I thought about that for a moment. “Who ever says that?” “Well, you got the whole house to yourself. Don’t eat all the food please. You know you can’t keep a body like mine with not eating.” “You know it. Ok, Dame, thank you. I owe you big time, you’re my best friend.” He chuckled, “You don’t have to tell me something I know is damn right. Love you.” I hung up the phone just in time. I rounded the corner to find a group of guys standing on the sidewalk, some leaning on the back of a truck. Now I would have thought this was scary before, but the even scarier part was, I knew most of them. As I got closer, the one guy that I hoped wouldn’t see me, did. Yay. Sorry it's so long:) moreResolved Question: Would Installing a window unit in a house with central air be beneficial ?
I live in a duplex that has central air. The thing is the living room stays pretty warm during summer. The reason for that is cause the house is so small their is only one vent to cool the whole front part of duplex. Like my living room and kitchen are connected which make one big room for one little 9 Invch vent to cool. My question is would it be worth it putting a little window unit in the window at front of duplex to help cool during heat of the day. The main a/c unit the central air runs all day which in Texas and the humidity is pretty normal. I was just thinking if i put a little window unit in living room it would help cool it better but would it use more electricity then it worth. Id have it on a power save mode cause i would not be using it as a main cooling unit. If the window unit was on during the heat of the day along with central air how much would it make my bill go up. I was thinking venty ver little if any at all. If you think about it if the window unit was on helping cool the main unit would shut off earlier in the night. right now where i live it will run from 7am to about 4the next morning then go off for couple hours then kick back on. I know this is one of them odd ? but i dont want to do it and make my bill go up a lot. I would expect it to go up a little if any. Is a rather small unit well small to medium but i would shut it off around 7 pm when sun went down and it cooled of a little. Please help me guys I know it kinda stupid question but oh well. I have 3 kids and wife so a new unit be to costly have to find a good used one. wish someone would just buy me a 5 k btu unit lol. cant afford new one wish i can but doubt it its not like someone going to just buy one and get it shipped to me lol. Thing is i can have my doors shut all day never go out and it still gets 85 to 90 in my house with ac on. texas weather u know. Well maybe ill get lucky and find a used one that works good. Like a lot of you im not made of money. moreResolved Question: Please answer my question? I care about him soo much?
Thank you so much for answering this question, and this is really serious, so please could you answer fully. thank you :) Okay so I go to school, and i am 15 years old. I know that you may think this is silly, but I think I am old enough to have these feelings. So at the start of this year, I was in a class with a boy. Our class was drama, and we didn't really talk much for a while. Then one day after school in town, he walked up to me and kissed my hand, and then walked away. After that we just clicked really, and got on really well whenever we would be in the same group for drama, and we would find each other really funny. Then one day a few months ago, we went on an after school trip to a theatre. I got on the bus, and he shouted out at me that he loved me in like a jokey way. I sat in front of him by a few seats, and he kept asking for me to go sit by him, but I didn't want to abandon my friends. Then when we got there, it just so happens that he is sat behind me. Then every time something scary was about to happen, he would pat my back and make me jump, and during the interval we had a long conversation about silly things really. On the way back we sat next to each other, and this is when I started to like him. I don't know what it was, I just felt a connection with him, like we were sat next to each other, but there were long periods of us just sat looking at each other. We swapped numbers at this point, and he kept saying- 'Ring me tonight, I want to hear your voice.', and he also told me allot about his dad passing away, and it was really intimate. Then we got off the bus, and we had a group photo. We hugged for ages, and then we walked back to the cars and I said 'I love you!" As we walked away, and then he said- "I actually love you more." I didn't ring him because it was late, and my whole family were in bed, but I knew that I really liked him. Then, for a few days after wards we didn't speak. One day we had drama, and he waited for me when he saw me. We were alone, and I said- "It feels like we haven't spoken in ages,", to which he replies- "Your just so pretty, whenever I look at you, and then look at me, I think there is no point because you are too good for me." I didn't really know how to take it, because I didn't really know what he was getting at. So I just kind of said "Don't be silly." and we carried on walking. But ever since then he has been acting really strange. Like when I walk into a room he seizes up, and acts really jittery. I was sat by him the other day, and he wouldn't stop fidgeting, which he never used to do. Then the other day, he like dive bombed my legs, and after that when we were doing a drama warm up, he like moved my friend out of the way, and shouted- "I'm having her!", and he like pushed my head down :S So now I'm faced with a dilemma. What does his behavior mean? What was he getting at when he said I was 'too good'? I'm also worried about him, because he gets drunk a lot, and one of my friends today was talking about him, and he made all of them cry by talking about his dad, and he was talking about being suicidal. I don't know whether it is love, but these are the strongest feelings I have ever had for someone and I simply don't know what to do. I feel like we can't talk because he acts so wierd now PLLLEEAASSEE help me? Thank youu xxxx moreResolved Question: does the beginning of my book sound good??!!?
okay im about to get this thing published and i need to know if its good enough and i was having a tough time with the beginning because my friend said it sounded boring, but i think its okay, if you like it i can put up more of the chapters latter Forget By: Sara Garcia Chapter 1 Life as we knew it …. Everything was dark, and silent. I was alone, all alone in the deep depths of the forever lost, just floating in the middle of nothing, or space. Where ever I am, it’s cold. The unbearable coldness made me suffer more than the empty loneliness did. What am I? Who am I? Was this supposed to be my hell? All of these questions that I couldn’t answer, that I would never get answered. Where was I supposed to get them? There was nothing. What was my purpose of myself being? I was never going to get out of this tunnel of darkness. I am never going to make it out of here. Being stuck, all alone, with nothing but me was frightening. I had nowhere to hide from the darkness, and nothing to hold on to. How did I even get here? Maybe no one could answer my question. Maybe no one could pull me out of the darkness and into the light. But maybe, just maybe I had to do it myself. That’s right, I need to be strong on my own and make something new out of this darkness. This strange thought of something in the darkness was coming. Just who was it? Or more like what was? It saw a small light it was floating in the darkness just like I had expected. I started to fallow it, but as soon as I got there it wasn’t any bigger than it had been when I first saw it. The little ball of light was glowing bright. Could I make something out of this little unknown object? I could. The little ball of light grew bigger. It stretched into a bigger ball of light. Just when I was thinking nothing could pull me out of the darkness, there it was. This time the light was right in front of me. All I had to do was step into it. Finally I let myself go; I could see how bright everything was. More little lights started to appear. Each one was a different color, and shape. They all flew across the darkness I was in, making the space not as dark. They were all spreading apart far away from each other, filling every dark spot. The main one that was right in front of me was the one I knew where I was meant to go. I let myself fall into it again. The one that I was in was made very special. In this one I put big rocks in it. The third rock would be called earth, and it would have life on it like me. I would make every living thing out of a part of my soul. Land appeared on the over sized rock. Then water appeared. Trees, animal, living organisms formed too. For 7 days I shaped and made life what it is. For those last 7 days I knew I wasn't going to be alone any more. I wasn't going to be in the dark and cold. There was going to be something great that I made out of the darkness; warm and brightness was going to replace most of the darkness. I was going to make such great creatures that where smart. There was going to be mankind, but humans were not going to know my secrets of the universe. I didn’t want to let humans know where I came from and all of the suffering I went through. Nothing that I will make is ever going to know how I created this world. There are some things in life that could not be found out for reasons beyond the human mind. That's why I created 3 separate keys for 3 separate books. Each one containing secrets so secret that not even the living of each world knows what's in their own worlds book. The time realm, the dream realm, and the light realm where the three dimensions that I created. They symbolized my best work. But I should have known that some of my creations would turn on me. Trying to get their greedy hands on one of the 3 books, Let alone the keys. Whoever has position of the books and looked inside them, they would know the meaning of life, and why it was created, but the one to own them all would be ruler of all the time in space, but of course everything has to have a catch. Once there is a new owner to these books, the owner will die shortly after they poses at least one of them, and be sent strait to the pits of hell where they will burn for eternity. No one would ever be able to take my place as ruler of the all time and space, but I know if anyone found out about the books and their power, things would get rather ugly. This world would become chaos, but as I thought sooner or later that day would come of my own creations turning against me. I made them too smart, too intelligent. One of the demotions figured out a way to take over, and that was the method that I had came up with…of trying to poses the three books of life. The light realm made up a powerful group called the Tillers. Their leader who came up with the brilliant plan was an alien named Grim. He assumed that they were going to bring me to my mercy and let them take over. If I did he would moreResolved Question: Why do I shake when I get confronted in an argument or in a fight.?
A few days ago at work, this black guy wanted to fight me because he thinks im dating his girl. So I was in the lunch room and he came over to me and said lets go outside and handle this. when he had come over to me he said my girl said this and that and you need keep my name out of your mouth. and he wanted me to go outside and fight him Right when he said that I got a warm hot adrenline rush and I became to shake uncontrollably.How come I shake like that..? In recent yrs when I got in a fight in high school kids always said I looked scared or nervous. Then later my supervisor came over to me and slammed something on my desk and yelled at me about something, and I got the same rush and felt very shaky and everything around me in vision I mean got sorta blurry except what was in front of me.? is this bad.? moreResolved Question: Please give creative criticism on a short extract?
Chapter 1 The morning sky is painted a serene portrait of pinks, yellows and vivid reds. As the sun rises from behind the mountains, light dances across the field of wheat and casts a golden glow that shimmers through the air. In the midst of the vast yellow sea stands a single tree in which I now sit. Gazing up at the sky, the moon is still visible in the dim glow of the sun. I smile to myself. The air is warm with a slight breeze that caresses my long brown hair. Above me, an apple hangs loosely to a branch and I pluck it off. Biting into it, memories of when I first discovered this spot of paradise escapes me. There seems to be something special about this place, something so simple and thought-provoking. I use this time to think. Every other hour of the day is filled with people who believe there's no need to wonder when everything's so perfect. What more could I want? With a sigh, I finish my apple and jump down off the low tree branch. It's time to start the day. My mind wanders through the options. I could sign up for a hike in the East Mountains, go for a walk through town, or maybe...my mind refuses the idea. The forest is off-limits to everyone. Its unmarked land could be dangerous. Besides, the sheer darnkess of it isn't the most welcoming sight. I shake the thought out of my head. Instead, I choose to go into town, though I doubt anyone will be up at this hour. It's a short walk up north from the field and so I arrive shortly. The vintage buildings loom overhead, blocking out the bit of morning light that's trying to shine through. Street lamps still burn from being lit the night before and the black cobblestone road gleams in reflection. Stretching out in front of me is row upon row of diners, shops, theatres, and stands. Each painted a glorious red and gold, almost as if to match the colors of the sunrise. No matter how many times I visit the city, it never ceases to amaze me with its timeless beauty. I walk down the street, glancing into windows as I pass. Occasionally I spot a worker or two setting up shop and they smile or wink at me. I simply wave back and continue on my way. The sun is mounting higher in the sky. It shouldn't be too long until the streets become crowded. moreVoting Question: My weekly Work out Routine?
Ok I am 14 and need to lose weight. I got this work out plan from a website and I was wondering if it is good for a 14 year old. And how long it should take till I start to see some results. And yes I will be dieting. Monday: Cardio •Warm-Up: 5 minutes •Cardio: 20-30 minutes of jogging, cycling, or sports •Cool-Down: 5 minutes Tuesday: Workout A •Barbell Squats: 3 sets of 8-10 reps •Pushups: 3 sets of 8-10 reps •Dumbbell Shoulder Press: 3 sets of 8-10 reps •Dumbbell Lunges: 2 sets of 10-12 reps •Side Lateral Raises: 2 sets of 10-12 reps •Barbell Curls: 2 sets of 10-12 reps •Bench Dips: 2 sets of 10-12 reps •Lying Leg Raises: 4 sets of 12 reps Wednesday: Cardio •Warm-Up: 5 minutes •Cardio: 10 sets of 1 minute of high intensity, 1 minute of low intensity •Cool-Down: 5 minutes Thursday: Workout B •Jump Squats: 3 sets of 8-10 reps •Pushups: 3 sets of 8-10 reps •Dumbbell Flyes: 3 sets of 8-10 reps •Dumbbell Step-Ups: 2 sets of 10-12 reps •Pullups: 3 sets of 10-12 reps •Front Dumbbell Raises: 3 sets of 10-12 reps •Standing Calf Raises: 2 sets of 15 reps •Exercise Ball Crunches: 4 sets of 15 reps Friday: Cardio •Warm-Up: 5 minutes •Cardio: 20-30 minutes of jogging, cycling, or sports •Cool-Down: 5 minutes I also have Rugby League Fitness Training on every Tuesday, Skills Training on a Thursday and a Game on every Friday. moreResolved Question: If there is one thing you do today, please may it be answering this question? I care about him soo much...?
Thank you so much for answering this question, and this is really serious, so please could you answer fully. thank you :) Okay so I go to school, and i am 15 years old. I know that you may think this is silly, but I think I am old enough to have these feelings. So at the start of this year, I was in a class with a boy. Our class was drama, and we didn't really talk much for a while. Then one day after school in town, he walked up to me and kissed my hand, and then walked away. After that we just clicked really, and got on really well whenever we would be in the same group for drama, and we would find each other really funny. Then one day a few months ago, we went on an after school trip to a theatre. I got on the bus, and he shouted out at me that he loved me in like a jokey way. I sat in front of him by a few seats, and he kept asking for me to go sit by him, but I didn't want to abandon my friends. Then when we got there, it just so happens that he is sat behind me. Then every time something scary was about to happen, he would pat my back and make me jump, and during the interval we had a long conversation about silly things really. On the way back we sat next to each other, and this is when I started to like him. I don't know what it was, I just felt a connection with him, like we were sat next to each other, but there were long periods of us just sat looking at each other. We swapped numbers at this point, and he kept saying- 'Ring me tonight, I want to hear your voice.', and he also told me allot about his dad passing away, and it was really intimate. Then we got off the bus, and we had a group photo. We hugged for ages, and then we walked back to the cars and I said 'I love you!" As we walked away, and then he said- "I actually love you more." I didn't ring him because it was late, and my whole family were in bed, but I knew that I really liked him. Then, for a few days after wards we didn't speak. One day we had drama, and he waited for me when he saw me. We were alone, and I said- "It feels like we haven't spoken in ages,", to which he replies- "Your just so pretty, whenever I look at you, and then look at me, I think there is no point because you are too good for me." I didn't really know how to take it, because I didn't really know what he was getting at. So I just kind of said "Don't be silly." and we carried on walking. But ever since then he has been acting really strange. Like when I walk into a room he seizes up, and acts really jittery. I was sat by him the other day, and he wouldn't stop fidgeting, which he never used to do. Then the other day, he like dive bombed my legs, and after that when we were doing a drama warm up, he like moved my friend out of the way, and shouted- "I'm having her!", and he like pushed my head down :S So now I'm faced with a dilemma. What does his behavior mean? What was he getting at when he said I was 'too good'? I'm also worried about him, because he gets drunk a lot, and one of my friends today was talking about him, and he made all of them cry by talking about his dad, and he was talking about being suicidal. I don't know whether it is love, but these are the strongest feelings I have ever had for someone and I simply don't know what to do. I feel like we can't talk because he acts so weird now PLLLEEAASSEE help me? Thank youu xxxx moreVoting Question: If there is one thing you do today, please may it be answering this question? I care about him so much...?
Thank you so much for answering this question, and this is really serious, so please could you answer fully. thank you :) Okay so I go to school, and i am 15 years old. I know that you may think this is silly, but I think I am old enough to have these feelings. So at the start of this year, I was in a class with a boy. Our class was drama, and we didn't really talk much for a while. Then one day after school in town, he walked up to me and kissed my hand, and then walked away. After that we just clicked really, and got on really well whenever we would be in the same group for drama, and we would find each other really funny. Then one day a few months ago, we went on an after school trip to a theatre. I got on the bus, and he shouted out at me that he loved me in like a jokey way. I sat in front of him by a few seats, and he kept asking for me to go sit by him, but I didn't want to abandon my friends. Then when we got there, it just so happens that he is sat behind me. Then every time something scary was about to happen, he would pat my back and make me jump, and during the interval we had a long conversation about silly things really. On the way back we sat next to each other, and this is when I started to like him. I don't know what it was, I just felt a connection with him, like we were sat next to each other, but there were long periods of us just sat looking at each other. We swapped numbers at this point, and he kept saying- 'Ring me tonight, I want to hear your voice.', and he also told me allot about his dad passing away, and it was really intimate. Then we got off the bus, and we had a group photo. We hugged for ages, and then we walked back to the cars and I said 'I love you!" As we walked away, and then he said- "I actually love you more." I didn't ring him because it was late, and my whole family were in bed, but I knew that I really liked him. Then, for a few days after wards we didn't speak. One day we had drama, and he waited for me when he saw me. We were alone, and I said- "It feels like we haven't spoken in ages,", to which he replies- "Your just so pretty, whenever I look at you, and then look at me, I think there is no point because you are too good for me." I didn't really know how to take it, because I didn't really know what he was getting at. So I just kind of said "Don't be silly." and we carried on walking. But ever since then he has been acting really strange. Like when I walk into a room he seizes up, and acts really jittery. I was sat by him the other day, and he wouldn't stop fidgeting, which he never used to do. Then the other day, he like dive bombed my legs, and after that when we were doing a drama warm up, he like moved my friend out of the way, and shouted- "I'm having her!", and he like pushed my head down :S So now I'm faced with a dilemma. What does his behavior mean? What was he getting at when he said I was 'too good'? I'm also worried about him, because he gets drunk a lot, and one of my friends today was talking about him, and he made all of them cry by talking about his dad, and he was talking about being suicidal. I don't know whether it is love, but these are the stringest feelings I have ever had for someone and I simply don't know what to do. I feel like we can't talk because he acts so wierd now PLLLEEAASSEE help me? Thank youu xxxx moreResolved Question: Why can't i talk to people?
For some reason, ever since I was little, I have had issues talking to people and I don't know why. I am 17, 6' 1", blond hair, blue eyes. My friends that are girls always tell me how surprised they are at my shyness because I am somewhat handsome. I can't talk to my parents about this because my mother belittles my problems and talks about how insignificant they are (I wouldn't say having a psychological issue with talking to people would be insignificant) and my dad and I don't share similar viewpoints on anything (he is an annoying hypocrite who makes an idiot of himself and makes everyone around him hate him because of that). My issue with talking to people is a childish shyness. I can hardly carry out conversations with any person who is even a little unfamiliar. I also have particular issues with speaking to large groups or in front of large groups of comrades (8+ people, it depends on how large the room is in contrast to the amount of people in it). I am by no means a shut in or a recluse. I have several hobbies (tennis, golf, guitar, photography, and snowboarding), get a lot of exercise, have a balanced diet, and have no trouble talking to people I have warmed up to. I need help to break this mental wall I have up for whatever reason. Thank you in advance moreResolved Question: Am I a good writer, I'm 14 but wrote this when I was 13?
Endorin I wiped the sweat from my forehead with my hand and tried not to let my mind wander off. Here I was in the midst of some of the strongest, most powerful, and most wealthy people in all of Alagesia and instead of talking with the dragon riders I was being lectured by...my mother. "And I swear you shall never run away again!"Oh would you look at that, her tirade was over. I nodded and looked down into the mirror I was talking with my mother with. I felt the uncomfortable presence of Islanzadi next to me and bitterly I recalled what had just happened. After my rant toward Murtagh and his dragon Thorn I had sat down and refused to go to the Queen. Thorn had lectured me while Murtagh had stood there with his mouth open like a pathetic loser. Why Thorn would have hatched for him I have no clue. After that, the doctor had released me like I was her prisoner. Tasia and Tasalae had escorted me dutifully to Islanzadi and then they left. Where they went I had no clue. Islanzadi had said nothing when the two women dropped me off but by the stiff way her guards was standing I could tell I had done something to make her mad. "Endorin listen to me!" I blinked and looked at the face in the mirror. With silvery blond hair and green eyes, she stood out among elves. Her face was perfect with high cheekbones, and soft features. As of now her eyes were bright with anger and worry and she kept biting her lower lip, which she did when she was raving. "I'm listening mother," I replied keeping my tone neutral. It would be no good arguing with her, especially in front of the Queen. "Good. After that meeting you are coming straight home and going to Silthrim--no buts!" I had opened my mouth to reply but by now I was angry. Without saying goodbye I passed my hand over the mirror, ending the contact. Then I remained still with my knuckles turning white from how hard I was holding the mirror. After a couple of minutes I looked up. People were still meeting and greeting. Turin, the supposed greatest-fighter-of-all was sitting on the varden side. He was new but he seemed to be the only one I really knew that I hadn't seen before. There wasn't many people still coming in anymore except for the occasional noble or lady coming in with the excuses rolling off their tongues. I didn't dare try and get up with the Queen's foreboding presence next to me. She had been silent the whole time except for the occasional acknowledging nod toward whomever it was that addressed her. I knew that this was her first time in public for a while and I was surprised at the least. Why would she choose now to come out? Because the forest was dying? There must have been some other motive to come out right now. Honestly I could care less. I just wanted to meet some of the riders. Kyemen was number one on my less. Strong and good-willed, an elf, and with the Varden why would I not like him. And his dragon, Sierthra was one of the biggest dragons out of them all and that made her one of the strongest. I hadn't met either of them yet but I definitely wanted to. Just then the magnificent doors opened. I struggled to see who was coming in, though I expected just another minor noble. But who I saw shocked me. I had never seen him, but had heard a great deal of him. His name was Schrren and he was the only other shade in existence besides Pele Serowe. His reputation preceded him though and the things I had heard that he had done shocked and revolted me. His maroon hair fell to his shoulders. It was combed for the occasion and his face seemed not as pale. In fact when you looked at him suddenly he looked...beautiful. More refined and delicate features. And then suddenly I felt a warm hand grip my wrist. I saw past the illusion and saw that Schrren's face was chalk white, his eyes still black pits and that he was really as ugly as ever. I looked up and saw Islanzadi staring at Schrren. She whispered to the guards and they nodded. Suddenly I felt afraid. The presence of a shade usually meant death. Now there were two shades and one of them was a supposed cannibal. This wasn't good at all. Islanzadi As my eyes scanned the Great Hall I tried to focus on what Endorin was saying to his mother. After Tasia and Tasalae had kindly brought him to me I had pulled out my scrying glass and he had quickly contacted his mother who was relieved at first..and then angry. Eventually I drifted and tried to recount everyone of importance that was here so far. For the Empire there was the two pairs of riders, Murtagh and Thorn and Aelyn and Kaldr. The doctor Malandra, Remy Karmenwati, and the Shade Pele Serowe. I couldn't think if there were any others but I chose to go over the Varden now instead. Nasuada was here, along with Nemo and Ikehr, Kyemen and Sierthra, and David and Aviand. Others of great importance besides myself, I could think of none. As I finished scanning the room I Sorry it got cut off at the end. Thanks everyone :). The one thing though is this post was in the middle of a GIANT rp. So everyone had already been introduced, but you wouldn't know it from reading what I posted on here. Anyways though, thanks a lot! moreVoting Question: Can I be held responsible if my dog bites Someone on my property even if they are not welcome?
I live in a rural part of ohio and have been getting a lot of solicitors selling meat, religion, etc. My dog has not bit anyone and is usually very good with strangers and warms up to people we have over very quickly, however when solicitors come knocking she is very protective and stands in front of me growling as I talk to them and if they look at her or talk to her she barks and growls with her teeth showing, if they ask me if she bites I tell them she might. If she does bite a solicitor can I be held responsible if it is on my property? And how can I keep solicitors from coming to my house? I don't want my dog to be put down for biting someone I didn't want on my property in the first place because she is doing her job of protecting myself and my kids. moreResolved Question: Why Do I Have A Sore Left Hamstring From Dancing?
Hi everyone, I was just wondering if any would be able to explain to me why I have a stiff and sore pain in my left hamstring only. It's really odd and I've never had this before but I haven't done any strenuous activity or anything out of the ordinary to even sustain This type of injury. I feel as though it's gotten so bad that when I kick my leg to the front or a la seconde, I get this strange stiff twinge in my left hammy and it's like my muscles are going to snap :S I'm worried that I may have done some serious damage, however does anyone have any ideas on why my left hammy has suddenly decided to get so stiff? I can't even warm up properly, let alone dance without any restrictions so how can I fix this!? Ahhh it's so frustrating! Thanks for your help! moreResolved Question: How to get over my nerves!?
I reaally want to start singing in musical theatre (Things like: Hairspray, Grease...) And I have posted a video online and people say I am good. I don't take lessons and sing whenever the house is empty. I know I am probably not at the stage yet to be in theatre ad stuff and I still need to get over my nerves as I can't sing in front of people! Last year I auditioned for High School Musical, and when we was all singing together warming up, the producer stood next to me and said my voice was good, but when it came to by myself, I just couldn't :[ I also had to convince my mum that a video of me singing was a friend and she said it was good, but i still cant!! Please how do I get over this? Thankyou! :] moreOpen Question: I really need help.! I'm So Confused. [relationship stuff]?
[This is going to be a LONG one, but please take some time out to read this and help me ): I'm so confused... Thanks in advance] I met this guy named Keith in April... on a Saturday night at this fundraiser thing. We talked for 3 hours, he didn't leave until i left.=] Then on Monday me..being dumb out of NO WHERE told him to come over... And he did. And later on that night he asked me out. we were going out for 2 weeks and everything was going good Then he broke up with me Because his car got smashed, and he had no other way to see me. and at the time we broke up, i didn't know the REAL reason of why we broke up. i heard many different reasons from different people. And i was just so confused... I heard that i was too clingy was the problem, another reason was because his car is smashed and he had no other way to see me. and he wanted me to be with someone who COULD make me happy at the time. and then i heard there was another girl involved..and i just had all these bad thoughts in my head about the REAL reason! AND So... just recently like 2 days ago, we talked...and i told him about my feelings towards him and how i missed him and stufff.. and i asked him what was the real reason of why we broke up he said in excact words ["aiite honestly i felt like we were rushing things and that sence i wouldnt be able to see you that you should be with someone that could and make you happy and i would try hooking up with you later when i got my car fix. there was never another chick tho"] We hung out at his house on that SAME night and we watched a movie together and cuddled... at the time when we hung out i had another bf named Codey... i told Keith i had a bf and he told me, cuddling was all we were gonna do [but he ended up kissing me first so we kissed that night] i cheated on codey that night cause i kissed keith.. So the next day after we hung out, he had some friends and cousins over. i called him, and he asked if i wanted to hang out and i said sure. so he picked me up. and his two friends were in the car[ i expected it to be just me and him in the car] So we're in the car, and we stopped by the store..and in the store i was behind the 3 guys...and keith was talking to them mostly and not me..so i was just a tag a long kinda... And i said to myself.. "if i knew it was gonna be like this when we hung out then i shouldve stayed home" So then we get to his house and chill with everyone for a bit..then we went swimming.. And his friend was tryna drown me..but keith followed him when he tried to do it and he brought me back over to the shallow side..cause i can't swim.. (: <3 an hour later? we all got out of the pool and went inside , then keith said he forgot to turn off the lights outside so he went outside and i followed him , he turned off the lights and i was JUST about to step on the porch to go inside and he held my hand spun me around to face him and he kissed me...(= Then we went inside, and he asked if i had a towel or not i said no. he gave me his towel[: Then he asked if i had dry clothes to change into and i said i have jeans just not a dry top [ i went in the pool with my friends bathingsuit bottom and my tanktop i wore that day] So i changed into his shirt and my jeans and sat on the couch..my hair is still wet and im SHIVERING! Keith PLOPPED right next to me and hugged me really tight and hugged me tightt and kept me warm and kissed me and stuff(: RIGHT IN FRONT OF HIS COUSINS/FRIENDS.. And let me tell you..i've Noticed ALOT of guys don't do that infront of family or friends...and it pisses US GIRLS OFF. But keith did it...he cuddled and hugged me and everythingg infront of everyone and he didn't caree. and i loved that about him.. We had a serious convo that night about getting back together after his car got fixed right? Soo the next day, i called him and we were talking and stuff but it really didn't seem like he wanted to talk to me... and i've been like giving him his space like every guy needs.. so i haven't been talking to him . even tho its been a DAY since i've seen him. And i don't know if he really does like me again or not...and i keep getting these stupid thoughts in my head about him using me, and not liking me and stuff.. idk im just a paranoid FREAK. please explain this relationship to me... i'm so confused... thank you in advance. (: <3 moreResolved Question: How can I get over this....?
The other day I was walking through the store when I felt the sudden need to go to the bathroom. I had just eaten some chili earlier that day so I knew there was no time to waste. I ran as fast as I could, looking for the facilities...I could feel the warm sensation running through my bowels so I picked up speed....I began to break out in a sweat..afraid I wasn't going to make it to the bathroom in time.That's when I started to panic... I picked up speed and started to run even faster. I got to the point where I didn't even look around me...I just ran and everything else was a blur. The thought kept going through my mind that I was not going to make it. I began to imagine the worst case scenario in my head. What would I do if I didn't make it to the bathroom...and all the contents of my bowels spilled out onto the floor...in front of everybody? ....Maybe I could tell people it was mud....yes, that's it! Tell them it was only mud....but no...the smell would give it away.... I pushed those thoughts aside and kept running, cheeks pinched and sweating like crazy. I eventually found an empty stall and I ran inside and relieved myself...sighing in relief. I went to reach for the toilet paper when I came to the horrifying realization that there wasn't any...."That's odd" I thought..."usually all bathrooms have extra toilet paper...". I got up and turned around....only to realize that what behind me was not a toilet....but a sitting stool....I turned swiftly to my right and saw a mirror...a full body mirror and my reflection in it...hunched over a sitting stool with my pants at my knees...my face turned white....I began to sweat....the hair on the back of my neck stood up... That's when I realized...I was actually inside a dressing room... moreResolved Question: English Story redone need some opinions!!?
Ok so I gave my story to my teacher and she said it is worth an A--. So I have added a bit cuz she said not to worry about the word limit. If you didn't read it last time then I had to pick a song then write a story about it. The song I picked was Untitled by Simiple Plan. Please Critique!!!! Thanks!! I open my eyes, I try to see but I’m blinded by the white light. I can’t remember how, I can’t remember why I’m lying here tonight. There’s a noise, a loud noise, I don’t know what it is. It’s like someone’s trying to crush the car into a million little pieces. I try to scream, but no sound comes out, just a low gurgling noise and something warm and sticky fills my mouth. I close my eyes and hope it all goes away, the pain, the noise, everything. I just want it to stop! I want it to be over! I hear a scream, it sounds far away. “She’s bleeding! Her mouth is bleeding!” It’s the same person as the one who screamed. The girl’s voice sounds familiar but I can’t think of who it is. I take a breath to try and think but no air comes; instead the warm liquid rushes down my throat. I try to think about what the girl had said, suddenly I realise, it’s blood. I try to cough to get the blood out of my lungs but it doesn’t work instead more blood flows down my throat. I can’t breathe! My eyes are getting heavy! I can’t hold on anymore! The pain is leaving my body. “Slow down! You’re going to crash!” screams Becky, but she’s not serious, she’s laughing along with all my friends “Don’t stress Becky, I’m a pro driver, we’re not going to crash!” I laugh. I turn around to look at my little sister, she looks happy but scared all at the same time. I have just gotten my P plates! It’s amazing, the freedom, being able to go from place to place without an adult, it’s like a dream come true. But before I was allowed to take my parents car out I had to promise that I wouldn’t do anything reckless or stupid and definitely not try to act cool in front of my friends. Of course I promised and I didn’t plan on doing anything stupid, but when I got onto the highway and saw that there was not a car around, I just thought what the hell. It’s not like I’m going to crash. I hear one of my friends scream but I can’t understand what they are saying. I turn back around to watch the road, but it’s already too late. I have veered on to the wrong side of the road and there is a truck coming straight at us. I try to swerve but the truck still hits the back of our car and pushes us down the bank. The car is rolling and I can hear the screams of my friends and my sister. I hit my head on the window and everything goes black. The pain is back. “Becky” I try to say but the words still won’t come, just more blood. I hear someone say internal bleeding, but it means nothing to me. The noise has stopped and then without warning the roof of the car comes off. I’m petrified, I long for my mum to come and tell me that everything is going to be alright, to hold my hand and make the pain stop. I want to be a little kid again! I try to cry but the sobs won’t come, I just keep choking on the blood, my blood. My lungs are burning as they come down to their last little supply of air. I’m starting to get dizzy again, my head is spinning. “Please make it stop!” I want to scream but I can’t! My eye lids feel like they weigh a tonne, I can’t keep them open anymore! I’m done fighting this! I can’t stop it any longer! I let my eyes slide shut. “NO! Stay with me!” I hear a voice but it sounds like it’s miles away. I’m starting to feel numb, I welcome it. As the night goes on I’m fading away. moreResolved Question: I don't know if this is a fever or not?
My forehead is at normal temperature but my neck is really warm I'm serious what is it? How can I make it better? I've already tried cold water but after a while it gets really warm again. My house is pretty hot and in the evenings the house is hotter than outside! So I keep sweating everyday the only time I don't sweat is when I wake up in the morning it's cool in the morning not the house but for me. So is there any other way for my neck? It's just warm maybe the skin's a bit dry too but I can't tell since it's so warm. Besides that everythings fine. And I usually just sit in front of the computer all day but I still sweat even when I'm perfectly still. Oh and I'm not taking any medicine or anything Oh yeah and in winter the house is colder than outside too unless we use the fireplace and when it was early spring outside it was quiet warm but inside it was still cold like winter Oh yeah and in winter the house is colder than outside too unless we use the fireplace and when it was early spring outside it was quiet warm but inside it was still cold like winter just wanted to let you know if that even helped O.o moreVoting Question: Advice on my story? Chapter one/Prologue?
Here's my story. Any critique welcome, please be honest. “Why?” he asked. His cold gray eyes seemed to be boring into her soul. She refused to meet his gaze, afraid her own eyes would betray her trembling soul. “Answer me.” His tone had lost all friendliness, if it had any to begin with. He hated her, she knew, but she thought this ordeal to be above him. This was what heartbreak was, she pondered. Not the initial rejection, not even knowing he had deceived you. No, it was everything that happened after, when once friendly words turned to those of hate and glances your way were as cold as ice. It was when he forgot why he hated you, and still put everything into keeping the hate alive. It was when you still loved them, despite all they had hurt you. The girl thought back to when she hadn’t known him. Had it truly been only a year back? She wondered how many opportunities to be with him she had missed, how many times she could have helped, but didn’t. Could she have made him care, simply by noticing sooner? “Answer me!” He hissed, after a few words to low to repeat. He pushed her against the rows of cold metal lockers. How easily he gave into rage, she thought. She thought to the many times he had purposefully avoided her. She remembered how she looked forward to the time when she would see him from across a classroom, how she would listen to every word of his long and boring speech, simply to hear his voice. And now, here he was, right in front of her, and she wouldn’t even talk. “Why?!” he repeated, his arm twitching at his side. Would he really hit me, she wondered. After every word of endearment, after every connection they had shared, he would physically harm her, in a moment of rage? For the first time, she feared. If he would do that so easily, what else was he capable of in a moment of rage? This time she met his gaze, her warm brown eyes locking with his cold gray ones. When she smiled, it was so broken it barely looked human. She didn’t conceal her emotions, letting them play across her face. Hurt, sadness, longing… and all he showed was anger. A tear ran down her pale face and dropped onto his arm. “Why not?” she answered. The girl walked out into the sunset, looking back just in time to see his dumbfounded face disappearing into the shadows. Thanks to everyone who answered! Guitar- thanks, I'll change that. Kira- I did have it indented, by when I put it onto Y!A, it didn't stay indented. Thanks again! moreResolved Question: What did her reactions means?
I love a girl. I confessed to her once but she just rejected. But I didn give up and tried every chance to be with her (on the verge of becoming a stalker, I tell ya). Her reactions were cold till last week, she became so warm toward me I could cry /:)). -But- What I WONDER- She always avoids the romantic questions or anything related about that, which seals my mouth off every time I try. Yesterday, I found a nice chance, I helped her friend move the stuff to her house. I thought she would 'buh-bye' me at the front door of her house, but she invited me in. After finishing the works, I was going to go home, she asked would I stayed and eat with she and her friend. After finished eating, I intended to go home again, she asked me to stay to help stuffing her friend's luggage (mind you, it was 1 am). When she took me out of the house, she looked so pretty I wanted to hug her and say how much I love her and how unbearable I have to hold that in. But It seemed I swallowed my tongue. However, at the bus stop, I just called her and said 'I love you, I wanted to say that infront of you but I couldn' AND she just *paused* and 'is there anything to say, we have to go to sleep now...' and I 'ugh err' like a dumbass and she REPEATED that again, then she WAITED for one minute and hang up... I was dumbfound, yes. If this could help you help me, we are Asian... Please tell me what did her reactions means? Is there any chance that she likes me already?... She is not a shy girl but she doesnt talk about -love- moreResolved Question: Can you guys read this please?
Hey everyone. I love writing and I starting writing this story today. I don't have very much but I would love to know what you guys think of it so far! Thank you! “I never thought he would die. I never meant for this to happen. It was just a game; just a joke. This is all a mistake.” I say calmly as the police question me for the millionth time. “I did nothing wrong. I didn’t kill him and I didn’t watch him be killed.” I get out of the chair that is so warm because I’ve been sitting in it for the last 15 horrible hours. I walk to the wall with the window and stare out of it, wishing I was in that world. “Then how did this happen? How did you even meet Adam?” Detective Brooks questions me. “How did I meet Adam?” I bark as I turn around to face him once more. “Last summer August 16th, 2009. It was a party for all the incoming seniors. It happens every year. He was new to the town. He was the “it” guy every girl and some of the guys wanted to do.” I walked to the table and sat on top of it looking out that same window as I tell the story that landed me here, the one that so far has put me in jail, and the one that I had a part of but it was not all me. I didn’t kill Adam. It wasn’t me but I’ll let you be the judge of that. “We got to the party at 10 o’clock. Everyone..” “Who is “we”?” Detective Brooks poses this question lightly I look at him pissed. “If you would let me finish I would tell you.” I stand back up and walk to the glass mirror I’m not a dumb blonde I know people are watching us. They are listening to every word that comes out of my mouth. “It was Cora, Melinda, and I. We went into the party and we were not the first there but I didn’t see him when I walked in. I remember it like it was yesterday.” I trail off (this stuff under is supposed to be in italic.) “No mother! We are just going to a small party you can trust me. It’s no big deal I promise mom. Would I ever lie to you?” Caroline says pushing her head out her bedroom door to look at her mom while she is still getting dressed. Caroline is a very bubbly girl with bright blue eyes that looks like the ocean and she has the most Barbie blonde hair you have ever seen. She is the girl that everyone wants to be. She is 100% the queen bee at Apple wood Private High School. “Cora let’s go!” Caroline screams as she runs down the stair in her sky high heels.” I’m leaving if you don’t get your fat *** down here right now!” “Caroline Marie!” Her mother howls “No cussing in this house young lady!” “Sorry Mommy.” She fakes a giggles as she runs to the car. They all get in the car and Caroline is driving. She runs a red light a street down from her house. They have the music up high and the windows down dancing and singing to the latest hit song by one of those boy bands. Caroline is always late so it is no surprise to anyone that she is late to her own party that she took on the hosting job for. Cora, the first one out, she opens Caroline's door for her, checking to make sure she looks perfect. Cora is a very quite girl with light brown hair and a nervous manner. When Caroline tells her to jump the first thing out of her pretty little lips is how high. Melinda is the last one out. She is lucky she made it into this group. She is not as skinny as the rest. In fact she is an overweight red head who is nothing but a gossiper. Everyone knows the only reason Caroline picked her up for her group was so Melinda would not gossip about her. The girls walk in Caroline (as always) walks in the front and center. All the guys stare as she walks by. Caroline is in search for one thing and one thing only; the new kid. She has been told by many people that not only has he got a handsome face with the clear, blue eyes that seemed to be staring always at you and only at you but he is a wonder in bed. His eyes are electric! They make every girl around town go mad. Caroline turns around and asks Cora if she has seen him. She is then told by Caroline to go find him so she can get what she wants. So what do you guys think? The part in Italic is her memories. Thats how she is telling the story. It will switch from present to past in the story! And I'd like to say the memory part is being told in 3rd person. moreMore How A Warm Front Results
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